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Introvert 'Haiku II'have you ever seen,  such lacerating wordplay,  miss subjective eyes? Introvert 'Haiku II'
by ~ngenius
Wanton Goddess: III PreviewI. All Seated  "Pews, all-taken, receive eulogous tears,  Requiem, faithless, falls short of sincere,  Hymnals in fugue echo sultry affairs,  To witness the rise of love and despair,"   
II. A Sour Disposition (Sonnet XV)  So sat the prey acrimoniously,  Haunched, debauched in lucid communicae,  As fingers pressed earth vitriolically,  Down-trodden mound where he languished that day,  When morningstars came to lose their lustre,  To dimly light candles of vibrant hearts,  Whose wicks fray 'neath the imminent bluster,  Of acetous winds who failed to impart,  Aforementio Wanton Goddess: III Preview
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Wanton Goddess: II[I. Adorned, Imperial (Son. XIII)]   
Arid, these days whisper mortality,  For intolerance demands abhorrence,  T'ward the Huntress, breeding banality,  'Tis that which lays splayed in the field, and hence,  Eloquence, awash, endeavours to stain,  Where, in the somnambulant fields, we stand,  Resigned mortality whispers in vain,  To perambulate, blind, seeking thy hand,  In great halls of white, bereft of foresight,  An old man stumbles 'neath faltering joy,  For words fall so trite, illuminous night,  'Pon dumbstruck ears playing ever so coy,  Quintessence, abandoned for v Wanton Goddess: II
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PerennialWeep catalyst dreams,  Desire pallid Winter's brieze,  Concerto for Spring... Perennial
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NEED MOAR FEEDBACK.

Sun Sep 17, 2006, 10:05 AM
I have taken it upon myself to write 2 sequels to Wanton Goddess: Libidinous Intrigue.

I have the layout/titles done, and I've started on the verse.

Wanton Goddess: Prelude To A Requiem [Complete] (13/6/06)

I. Adorned, Imperial (Sonnet XIII)
II. All Arise
III. A Wintry Disposition (Sonnet XIV)

Wanton Goddess: Requiem (?/?/?)

I. All Seated
II. A Sour Disposition (Sonnet XV)
III. Surreptitious Inefficiencies
IV. Departure
V. May
VI. A Medicinal Soliloquy
VII. Reunion
VIII. Intrigue Recrudescent
IX. On the Importance of Quiescence (Sonnet XVI)
X All Disperse

Sample:
"Eloquence, awash, endeavours to stain,
Where, in the somnambulant fields, we stand,
Resigned mortality whispers in vain,
To perambulate, blind, seeking thy hand,"

Tell me what you think, fuel my inspiration.

I HAVE UPLOADED A PREVIEW FOR PART III: REQUIEM. PLEASE SUBMIT SOME SORT OF FEEDBACK AS I AM STUCK IN A RUT AND NEED SOME SORT OF INDICATION THAT I'M ON THE RIGHT TRACK HERE. Wanton Goddess: Requiem preview available here.
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~ShadedRain Mar 5, 2008, 8:10:18 PM
In an effort to clean up my watched/watcher lists, I am blocking people that haven't commented and refuse to remove my name from their list. You have not commented on anything of mine in a long time. If you want to be allowed to watch me again, e-mail blackburningtears@yahoo.com with your deviantart user name so I can unblock you.

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~mercury-yume Oct 6, 2006, 2:50:22 AM
satanist lol

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~ngenius Oct 6, 2006, 11:00:17 PM
ya, check the date. i was a wanker.

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~mercury-yume Oct 6, 2006, 11:10:29 PM
just saw you saying stuff about owning a satanist bible and someone saying 'oh, you reckon ur a satanist eh?'

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~ngenius Oct 6, 2006, 11:32:27 PM
dude...wait, what?

i own lots of religious texts, satanic bible is one, but i sure havent spoken about it within the last 12 months, at least not on DA

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~mercury-yume Oct 7, 2006, 7:41:37 PM
I was just reading your front page...or possibly acitivty...I don't now...they were like "i dun think ur satanic" so you said "dude, I own a satanic bible"

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